Too short. I felt like it could of been a really good cartoon if it was longer. Plus I liked the smooth animation.
Too short. I felt like it could of been a really good cartoon if it was longer. Plus I liked the smooth animation.
Yeah it is a bit on the short side, my current project is a 5 minute job so maybe you'll like that one if you see it. :) Thanks for watching and commenting :D
How adorable, liked it.
Aalthough I didn't really like the art, I do find thiscartoon some what entertaining. Also if datcrazyblackboy ever reads this. This site is meant to people who just like to create stuff. People post GameGrumps and StarBomb animated's here.
Ryan, I hope this stays as a classic cartoon on the internet for years, you've earned!
This is super stylised, the animation, the lack of colours and the weird, but calming art style makes a great and calm cartoon. It may have needed a bigger or longer plot. I mean it's good for what it is now, but I know it could of been better. The music is also part of the atmosphere making everything beutiful. Great work.
The cartoon is bad, but it's not good eighter. Ican understand the jokes, but writing isn't enough to make the jokes funny. There's timing and then there's the perfect voice acting. Your cartoon kinda didn't have that. Because of that, when Ash started to be in other places became confusing and out of place. But besides that, you need to improve your art, like linework, shadows and backgrounds to really gain the atmosphere.
I liked the animation and art style, maybe not so much for the writing in some places, but the cartoon is enjoyble.
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