Minimalistic animation. The cartoon is barely understameble, everything made in sketches, and no sound. Sorry, I didn't enjoy
Minimalistic animation. The cartoon is barely understameble, everything made in sketches, and no sound. Sorry, I didn't enjoy
I mean, it's an animatic. A story board.
While the animation is good at some points, a lot of it is weird and feels like every detail of characterlives on it's own. The backgrounds were minimalistic and had a feel to it that I liked, maybe didn't have to go for such strong overused blue, but okay. For the writing and art it self... Too much like anime, needs to bejust original and fresh!
In terms of backgrounds I'm not really the best at them, so thanks for the compliment. As for art style, you know I always felt my art style was a little much anime inspired, but then again look at 80% of the online artist community and you will see that anyway, so it's rather hard to break away from that, but lord knows I'm trying =3. As for animation, I was trying a lot of new things on this one, which caused a few places to look wierd, I'll be looking to improve on that on my next project, where character animation will be the main focus on it. Thanks for the review btw =3
The idea was not that bad, but the line work.... You have to improove that!
WOW U CLEARLY NO NOTHIN ABOUT ART, Just kidding xD
Kk i got you. Thanks!
But this is newgrounds
No. This is Patr...*someone shoots me in the face for attempting to use that overused joke*
Also, I know but it's an animation so I put it on here anyway.
I'm sorry, but I really don't get it
Usually would blam this kind of stuff but I laughed at the April fofofofols part haha. Good job
Haha, thanks you!
The action was okay. But this is not finished and the sound quality is horrible.
Ya I probably shouldnt have used the sounds I did, do you know of a good free resource for fighting sound effects?
This was so ridicilous, I loved it
naw thanks man (:
Your style is really weird, but in a good way. Needs a lot more animation. And let me guess, the voices were ade in voice changer?
No voice changer used. I very rarely use a voice changer unless it's called for. Thanks for the critique. Weird in a good way is fine with me. This was finished in a weekend so sometimes I have to cut most animation intensive work. Thanks again.
Great cartoon, could use more fun colours, and the movement was kinda limited, but the frame rate waspreety okay, and the backgrounds were detailed. Expresions coulduse more work tho, don't need to be over the top with them, makes them feel very unusual and unatural. Anyway, decent job!
-Red
you're probably right but i just had quite fun making the over the top reactions ^^
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