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Dude that was cool

Please, accept criticism and don't message me more than 15 times with your fan girl or whatever. The reason I said you don't put soul in to this, is cause you don't. If you did, you wouldn't be submitting content so fast all the time, actually it would take time for you to make something. I'd like to add that you should stop using same character models for a lot of characters, like in this cartoon where you copy pasted a lot of soldiers. What's sad is that your characters look all very similar even when not copy pasted. Also I compleetly agree with Mackle-Mouix. You tween everything, and that just doesn't look fresh. I don't hate tweens, but these are not even good ones. Your content is just lazy. Quick to make, lazy art style, and bad animation. But I'd suggest, for your next cartoon. Re-draw every frame that exists, paint your backgrounds, experiment with colours, make every character individual, and also add shadows to your characters. You need to impove your art and animation so much!

Minimalistic animation. The cartoon is barely understameble, everything made in sketches, and no sound. Sorry, I didn't enjoy

Sdoyle716 responds:

I mean, it's an animatic. A story board.

Sorry if I'm harsh, but yeah, no soul or time put in your works.

Pffft didn't scare me. 00000000000/10. Jk lol I'll give you a 2,5 for the irony.

Weirdly stylised, but I liked it.

Meh, but alright.

While the animation is good at some points, a lot of it is weird and feels like every detail of characterlives on it's own. The backgrounds were minimalistic and had a feel to it that I liked, maybe didn't have to go for such strong overused blue, but okay. For the writing and art it self... Too much like anime, needs to bejust original and fresh!

Silverelick responds:

In terms of backgrounds I'm not really the best at them, so thanks for the compliment. As for art style, you know I always felt my art style was a little much anime inspired, but then again look at 80% of the online artist community and you will see that anyway, so it's rather hard to break away from that, but lord knows I'm trying =3. As for animation, I was trying a lot of new things on this one, which caused a few places to look wierd, I'll be looking to improve on that on my next project, where character animation will be the main focus on it. Thanks for the review btw =3

The idea was not that bad, but the line work.... You have to improove that!

CafeLovai responds:

WOW U CLEARLY NO NOTHIN ABOUT ART, Just kidding xD
Kk i got you. Thanks!

But this is newgrounds

daltonforrest responds:

No. This is Patr...*someone shoots me in the face for attempting to use that overused joke*

Also, I know but it's an animation so I put it on here anyway.

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